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Nothing To Me |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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For all those things I've done, Turn away and run. There's nothing to me now, Mercyfully I kneel and bow. Brighter days make way for harsh pain, And inside I've been slein. Your love flows into me, Without you clouded I'll be. So just to let you know, Though I was wrong for you my heart does glow. My love and desire for you still grows, Is it to be? You're the only one who knows. Without you... There is no me, This everyone can see. There's nothing to me now an empty shell unfolding.. Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Kyle...this just aches and I feel the pain! Excellent write as always. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Tough situation to be in. Great poetry, sad story! Liked this one. JL  |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good poem... sad, but enjoyable to read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 ouch |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I'm always here kiddo... |
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