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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Deceived if you are looking for me I can be easily found I am running a few steps behind the wind trying hard to catch my breath for I was deceived in thinking I could keep up with my heart "be prepared to bleed" Joni Mitchell |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Great write Helen but when I finished I noted Joni Mitchell's quote, and I couldn't help but think that they sure went together  How's the finals - done? |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Wow. good one, I liked it alot. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
OMG, Helen --- maybe you're trying to catch your breath, but your words sure blow me away!  ........jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just stay somewhere in the vacinity in case it gets itself into trouble...you won't be far behind |
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