Open Poetry #32 |
A simple sigh of summer |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Skies shimmer in endless hues of blue Cotton candied and delicious The amber sun wraps its warmth about Drawing me close and dear The stirring breeze whispers soft A hum of sweet summer daze And I lay upon a grass green quilt Melting into puddles Sigh . . . S.A.T. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A thoroughly enjoyable read. Thanks, Susan! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Sigh" ~ indeed!!! Highly appealing and peaceful! ~ May your summer be filled with sighing momes as such! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
So beautiful this poem is. I could picture it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks friends, Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
So many wonderful images to be seen here Susan. Take care..........Sue I am in motion |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks Sue -- Hugs -- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I'm there! big *SIGH* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes life seem good |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
You write so vividly. Imagery is your forte. I have told you a number of times now that you have such an exquisite gift of painting pictures with your deft collection of words. The bonus, of course, is that these pictures always carry some inspirational or critical message that everyone can draw from and identify with. I thoroughly enjoy reading your magic posts. Your poetic friend, Kevin |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Jo, you always make me smile , back atcha. P.S. Life can be good if we see it that way. Having a little trouble with my vision today, but then, happens to all of us. Kevin, I always appreciate your encouragement. Thanks for the kind words. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Magical write... TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
like wandering into a summer daydream |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
TD and Inkedgoddess, thanks for stopping by and for leaving me with a smile Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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