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Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2004-06-29 05:03 PM




paper moonlight dance in the night
kick up the dirt on your shoeless feet
take off these shackles that hold you down
tied tight so tight keep you on the ground
sweetness flows and sweetness cures
all my pains that i endure

all i know is all i see
and i'm not sure if that is reality
so come to me my tethered friend
pick up your burdens wipe your tears again
shift your thoughts from pain to ease
creep into my heart if you please

turn oh turn me around
turn my world upside down
close my mind and open my heart
lets go right back to the start
and fall in love all over again


© Copyright 2004 Amanda Seymour - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2004-06-29 06:29 PM


Much enjoyed....and this is very inviting....how could he say no?!
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-06-29 06:44 PM


Nice.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-06-29 07:35 PM


Oh, I love that carefree, joyful feeling of falling in love! You captured it perfectly!

~ May you experience such joy perpetually!

EA

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-06-29 08:04 PM



Oh, this has papered my walls, my soul, my song...

this is wonderful!!!

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-06-30 04:34 AM


you go girl
Tequilia_Sunrise
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6 posted 2004-06-30 08:15 AM



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