Open Poetry #32 |
A Chest with No Handles |
miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Old chest, your handle’s missing Where did it go? Is it locked away, or did in Anger explode? Or Was the chest absorbing the skips of a beat, When one came near Had it no alternative but retreat? In any case, what good can come of a chest with no handles to be opened by none? |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
a person could find several meanings in this...well done Victims....aren't we all. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Intriguing write that got me to wondering and a pondering. Hmm, let me see. Well, perhaps if someone were to take the time to make a new handle for the chest, the chest might feel that love and grow another handle of its own ~ and a chest full of love, truly is a treasure! Love & Light, EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Interesting...perhaps the chest is waiting for someone to view, that even without handles, the chest retains it's value. SMiles and hugs...good one! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Interesting write......I knew a girl like this.....chest with no handles...think she had plastic surgery...she's got really big handles now....good write.. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
snowflake from hell, I suppose you're right. Thanks for reading and your nice comment. miscellanea Earth Angel, Thanks for your words and thoughts. I enjoy your visits. miscellanea LeeJ., Your words are enlightening. Thank you. miscellanea Toerag, umhuh...somehow I knew someone would brighten my day with humor. And you knew such a girl? You silly One. I enjoyed your humor. miscellanea |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I would have to agree with you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sad, but good analogy. *smile* |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, I love how your mind works and the interesting ideas it poses. Much enjoyed. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perhaps magic words are needed? Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
miscellanea I'm sure there is a way to see what is inside...for the right person. Enjoyed your poem very much! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As with the first response, I think there is more to this than can be posted here...so... yea....check your e-mail... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
passing shadows, thanks. You're a dear. miscellanea iliana, It does seem that way doesn't it? Who knows? Thanks for your comment, iliana. miscellanea Susan, You're much too kind and modest. It is I who should say that of your work. miscellanea Enchantress, Your written words radiate magic. Perhaps, it will open now.. Thanks, miscellanea Martie, To see, and to open are two different things. (I just had to play a devil's advocate!) Smilin' at ya, miscellanea Sunshine, Now that I re-read it, it could be what you said. You've got me!!! You're a hoot! Thank you, Sunshining! miscellanea |
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