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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2004-06-28 08:12 AM

many nights found me in tears, longing
many days arrived with expectation, hoping
each year began to pass with my faith, waning
until reality left my heart, despairing

all the while you left me here, languishing
with eyes on stars and dreams, wishing
aware of something precious, dying
I await it's last breath, greiving

with alluring voice, you kept calling
on wings I'd come, answering
only to find your mysterious smile, teasing
for you had no intentions of loving

me

Another song for you I am singing
I swear, the last one I am writing
for your silence left my heart breaking
and there exist no reasons for fighting,

right?

~tier

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-06-28 08:32 AM

Such a beautiful ache to this Tier.
A lovely lyrical piece that could be put to music.
Love the way it sounds read aloud.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-06-28 10:37 AM

"Another song for you I am singing
I swear, the last one I am writing
for your silence left my heart breaking
and there exist no reasons for fighting,"

I have felt this song myself and recognize the tune in your words. Lovely sad write, Tier.

........jo

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

3 posted 2004-06-28 12:06 PM

would make a good song indeed

Victims....aren't we all.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-06-28 12:09 PM

Tiersdin,
A good write, enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-06-28 12:25 PM

oh I relate...understand this well

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2004-06-28 02:38 PM

Oh! This is what i want to say!

~for your silence left my heart breaking~

Those last lines, are perfect. into my library! xx

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

7 posted 2004-06-29 11:38 AM

This one almost got by me.

Now, let me push it back to the front, so others can enjoy it too.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2004-06-29 11:50 AM

Much enjoyed this, my friend.

jwesley

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

9 posted 2004-06-29 12:11 PM

"with alluring voice, you kept calling
on wings I'd come, answering
only to find your mysterious smile, teasing
for you had no intentions of loving

me"

Classic Tier longing, pleasure and pain intertwined in a dance with no promises.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2004-06-29 12:14 PM

A lovely, eloquent ~ but wistful write ~ with a touching plaintiff plea at its end ~ "Right?"

EA
It was a pleasure to read you again!

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