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Beyond My Skin
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Beyond My Skin |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Beyond My Skin looking back I see I didn’t judge the distance quite right depth perception has never been my strong suit it wasn’t until after you were gone that I realized how deep in me you actually were "be prepared to bleed" Joni Mitchell |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Really good play on words, Helen. I hope the hurting does last too long.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 sorry for your pain |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow this aches lady. Those guys they sure do get under our skin don't they? PS, I am SO proud of you for what you have accomplished for yourself Helen.  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
But as they fade in the rear view, remember the note that's on it....objects in mirror are closer than they seem. Sometimes if we stop a little, back a little....though sometimes not.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
depth perception is almost always clear in hindsite my friend and yet we seldom see it coming... really good write here... jwesley |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Reading you just now made my skin crawl ... ... and even do a breakdance!! Its nice not to be alone ... *S |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh Helen, this was fantastic! and so understood.  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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