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Martie
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0 posted 2004-06-27 10:10 PM



In my fantasy there are many kinds of flowers

I put my hair up for you
to be taken down

Listen to the words    a sigh
is the truth and also lie

I will say the words for you
like the night I am not proud

That’s the reason I undress in the light

Sometimes the sound unfolds in me
music and love
and I can’t hold myself in

Until tomorrow

© Copyright 2004 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-06-27 10:53 PM


Sometimes the sound unfolds in me
music and love
and I can’t hold myself in

Until tomorrow


Ah, Martie, yes. Only you can write a sigh.
hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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2 posted 2004-06-27 11:00 PM


Amazing write, Martie.   ....jo
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3 posted 2004-06-27 11:30 PM


In my fantasy there are many kinds of flowers

The imagery in the title and the first line alone is incredible....and the rest.

Beautiful Martie, simply beautiful.

it's a kepper.

M

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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4 posted 2004-06-28 02:49 AM


beautiful
serenity blaze
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5 posted 2004-06-28 04:15 AM


and a lovely bloom you are, too.


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6 posted 2004-06-28 06:12 AM


Oh, Martie - too many people "hold themselves in" and I so glad you can't.
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7 posted 2004-06-28 07:41 AM


Sometimes the sound unfolds in me
music and love
and I can’t hold myself in

Until tomorrow


awesome....you are a flower and so is your ability to enjoy life and who you are, not being afraid to articulate your feelings
lovely write

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8 posted 2004-06-28 08:11 AM


Sometimes the sound unfolds in me
music and love
and I can’t hold myself in
===========================

please dont ever stop....
your unfolding is pure poetry.

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9 posted 2004-06-28 08:29 AM


Ohmygosh!  This is incredibly beautiful Martie.
IWIHWT!!    Hugs, Nancy~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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10 posted 2004-06-28 08:47 AM


Sometimes the sound unfolds in me
music and love
and I can’t hold myself in

Until tomorrow

In some ways, I know that feeling. *S* But I think you've redefined anticipation with this beauty. *S*

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11 posted 2004-06-28 09:02 AM


Martie
And sometimes it enfolds me too.

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12 posted 2004-06-28 09:25 AM


Sometimes the sound unfolds in me

~*~

Oh, oh....
let your muse visit me?

Puhleeze?


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13 posted 2004-06-28 04:06 PM


Martie - how woderfully you express things - I so enjoy the journeys you take me on while I read - this is so good - I just loved it - Paul
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14 posted 2004-06-28 05:03 PM


beautiful, the poem and the person it depicts
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15 posted 2004-06-28 10:10 PM


Simply a beautiful picture you've painted.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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16 posted 2004-06-28 11:03 PM


beautiful written, Martie...

jwesley

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17 posted 2004-06-28 11:08 PM


Each of these is you...completely in all aspects...and each is good. I hope that what you are really asking for here comes to be...I truly do.

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18 posted 2004-06-30 11:38 PM


Have I ever mentioned to you how much I like your poetry?

*smile*

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19 posted 2004-07-01 08:21 AM


as usual my friend... very nice...
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20 posted 2004-07-01 09:19 AM


So fanciful ~ and freeing!

Your words are as fragrant and lovely as the flower that you are!
Flowers
Flower hugs,
EA

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21 posted 2004-07-01 12:14 PM


Only because you're so beautiful in soul and spirit...is why we keep coming around to read, and take inspiration, from your generous gift of words.


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