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In my fantasy there are many kinds of flowers
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In my fantasy there are many kinds of flowers |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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In my fantasy there are many kinds of flowers I put my hair up for you to be taken down Listen to the words a sigh is the truth and also lie I will say the words for you like the night I am not proud That’s the reason I undress in the light Sometimes the sound unfolds in me music and love and I can’t hold myself in Until tomorrow |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sometimes the sound unfolds in me music and love and I can’t hold myself in Until tomorrow Ah, Martie, yes. Only you can write a sigh. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Amazing write, Martie.  ....jo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
In my fantasy there are many kinds of flowers The imagery in the title and the first line alone is incredible....and the rest. Beautiful Martie, simply beautiful. it's a kepper. M The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and a lovely bloom you are, too.  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, Martie - too many people "hold themselves in" and I so glad you can't. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Sometimes the sound unfolds in me music and love and I can’t hold myself in Until tomorrow awesome....you are a flower and so is your ability to enjoy life and who you are, not being afraid to articulate your feelings lovely write |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sometimes the sound unfolds in me music and love and I can’t hold myself in =========================== please dont ever stop.... your unfolding is pure poetry.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ohmygosh! This is incredibly beautiful Martie. IWIHWT!! Hugs, Nancy~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sometimes the sound unfolds in me music and love and I can’t hold myself in Until tomorrow In some ways, I know that feeling. *S* But I think you've redefined anticipation with this beauty. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie And sometimes it enfolds me too. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes the sound unfolds in me ~*~ Oh, oh.... let your muse visit me? Puhleeze? |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - how woderfully you express things - I so enjoy the journeys you take me on while I read - this is so good - I just loved it - Paul |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
beautiful, the poem and the person it depicts  |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Simply a beautiful picture you've painted. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
beautiful written, Martie... jwesley |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Each of these is you...completely in all aspects...and each is good. I hope that what you are really asking for here comes to be...I truly do. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Have I ever mentioned to you how much I like your poetry? *smile* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
as usual my friend... very nice... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
So fanciful ~ and freeing! Your words are as fragrant and lovely as the flower that you are!  Flower hugs, EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Only because you're so beautiful in soul and spirit...is why we keep coming around to read, and take inspiration, from your generous gift of words. |
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