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Open Poetry #32

The wieght of truth

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2004-06-27 12:58 PM

Where ever you may be
Maybe you’ll think of me

Beneath the endless sea
Starves the child that’s me

Hopelessness makes me free
I’m blind, but plainly see

You and I now can’t be

Juju

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-06-27 02:27 AM

Oh, Juju, this is so sad. Hang in there.

.....jo

Kevo
Member

since 2004-06-02

Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA

2 posted 2004-06-27 02:36 AM

Reminiscent of days gone by. I was there in your shoes. Loving that which was not meant for me; or so I thought. What will be, will be. Time is a healer of ALL things. I also recognized, years later, when I met my wife, that I had never really loved before her. Where I thought I had loved others long ago, I find it absent because I have never fealt love like the love I share with the mother of my son. Perhaps this is your dilemma, your time, your trial awaiting an awakening. Or, perhaps it is love, pre-destined, just not the right moment in time, yet. A heart-wrenching poem so well crafted has touched me, tonight and taken me back.

Kevin

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2004-06-27 09:59 PM

Thank you kevin and Jo

Juju

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