Open Poetry #32 |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you ![]() |
Didn’t you hear me? I cried for you and oceans bled...... This ache isn’t new to me simply refreshed when you hold me in your eyes touch me with your voice destroy me, in your absence I’ve always loved you.... ....I always will.... And when you close your eyes tonight .....listen..... ~SEA~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA Listen and hear the Sea. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSweetSEA~ How beautifully melancholic is this piece ... VERY~ Love you gal~ ![]() *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Susan....just beautiful!! Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Didn’t you hear me? I cried for you and oceans bled...... ~*~ You know how pleased I am with this one... ![]() |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Perfect! Just perfect. Bunny hugs for you. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Didn’t you hear me? I cried for you and oceans bled...... ============================ destroy me, in your absence =========================== to quote you.... GOOD GRIEF. ![]() (ykikyk) ![]() |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"This ache isn’t new to me simply refreshed" Wonderful! ![]() "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
smiling at you--I'm wordless miscellanea |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SEA, this pulls on my heart strings, and I listen.....what I hear is so much longing and love. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah sigh to love someone so much |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
have missed your beautiful words SEA... a pleasure to read them again... jwesley |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The Sea holds true three things ... Beauty, Power, and Life!! *S |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Excellent in its expression of frustration and ache. It hurts. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
How did I not see this? Amazing SEA....I cried for you and the oceans bled....wow. |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
i found a shell put it to my ear and heard your voice upon the echo of the winds enjoyed bernie ![]() A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If he were to really "listen", there would be tears in HIS eyes... ![]() EA |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
beautiful indeed Victims....aren't we all. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I'll do just this.....I'm hard of hearing, and, if my eyes are closed...I'll try to feel your words with braille...okay?...I'll "listen" for ya tonight....nice write gal... |
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