Open Poetry #32 |
Just Hold on Tight… |
Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58 |
Just Hold on Tight… I cried for you in my sleep I sung for you in my prayers every time I wake, I see your face everyday with a few more tears I find my self wondering how lost you must be could I guide you home, could I light the way I can’t let you slip I can’t let you fall here’s my hand, just hold on tight don’t let go until everything’s all right These are song lyrics but this seem like a good place to post them. I was half crying while I wrote those lyrics. My best friend is not doing so well...I have no other way left but this. I can't sing but I know a very good singer at my chruch who can sing this. Its my last ounce of strength and sanity written on paper...its so hard to see her hurting. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ron, I'm sure your words will touch her deeply. I'm keep her in my prayers. ......jo |
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Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58 |
Here is the complete version I just got done with... Just Hold on Tight I cried for you in my sleep I sung for you in my prayers every time I wake, I see your face everyday with a few more tears I find my self wondering how lost you must be could I guide you home, could I light the way I can’t let you slip I can’t let you fall here’s my hand, just hold on tight don’t let go until everything’s all right Why must you be so far away Why can’t you see me here where I pray All I want is to see you free Free from misery, free from pain Please, don’t run away I just have this to say Take my hand …and just hold on tight… -Ron Joseph Rios Friday, June 25, 2004 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ron, this is so touching.... makes the heart ache.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are strong...you will make it through, and you'll both be better for it |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tears were actually welling up in my eyes as I read your loving, empassioned lyrics. You, yourself, are a friend worth having and cherishing. I will pray for your friend's well-being. Loving hugs to you both, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ron, this is beautiful! Your friend is very fortunate to have you to lean on. I will say healing prayers. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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