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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2004-06-25 05:12 PM


special
thoughts of you
float
down

effortlessly
like a
feather

as softly as
the light summer breeze
that licks
bitter-sweet
tears

symphony of
simple lines
lyrically wish you
the best in
this wide
world

as effortlessly as
leaves
dropping off
trees
these words float
from my
winter-shrivelled
lips

while
your dawn
breaks through
the darkness
of my
night

I smile
acceptingly
in reluctant
nods


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suthern
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1 posted 2004-06-25 05:18 PM


This is one of your best, my friend... I loved every line!!!
Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-06-25 05:57 PM


Excellent!!  Love this Sudhir!
And...I'm keeping it!
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-06-26 04:39 AM


very soft and warm
Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 2004-06-26 03:20 PM


Thanks so very much

Regards
sudhir

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5 posted 2004-06-29 12:19 PM


Four days ago, a feather floated down to me out of a clear blue sky....and paused in front of me as if waiting for me to take it out of the air....which I did....and yes, I had many, many thoughts spring from that, or continue in new paths because of it.

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jwesley
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6 posted 2004-06-29 12:22 PM


This, in my humble opinion, is the best I've seen of yours, my friend, and I have seen most of them I think... very, very well written (as are all yours - guess I'm partial to this one).

jwesley

Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 2004-07-13 08:02 AM


thanks muchly Ed and jwesley

regards
sudhir

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