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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2004-06-25 05:12 PM

special
thoughts of you
float
down

effortlessly
like a
feather

as softly as
the light summer breeze
that licks
bitter-sweet
tears

symphony of
simple lines
lyrically wish you
the best in
this wide
world

as effortlessly as
leaves
dropping off
trees
these words float
from my
winter-shrivelled
lips

while
your dawn
breaks through
the darkness
of my
night

I smile
acceptingly
in reluctant
nods

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2004-06-25 05:18 PM

This is one of your best, my friend... I loved every line!!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-06-25 05:57 PM

Excellent!! Love this Sudhir!
And...I'm keeping it!

Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-06-26 04:39 AM

very soft and warm

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

4 posted 2004-06-26 03:20 PM

Thanks so very much

Regards
sudhir

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2004-06-29 12:19 PM

Four days ago, a feather floated down to me out of a clear blue sky....and paused in front of me as if waiting for me to take it out of the air....which I did....and yes, I had many, many thoughts spring from that, or continue in new paths because of it.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2004-06-29 12:22 PM

This, in my humble opinion, is the best I've seen of yours, my friend, and I have seen most of them I think... very, very well written (as are all yours - guess I'm partial to this one).

jwesley

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

7 posted 2004-07-13 08:02 AM

thanks muchly Ed and jwesley

regards
sudhir

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