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Open Poetry #32

Living Masterpiece...

Ku'uipo
Junior Member

since 2003-09-25

Posts 42

0 posted 2004-06-25 04:38 PM

I never knew crimson could shine so bright,
Irredescent almost invisible color,
It burns my eyes,
Steady glow,
The ocean becomes a living canvas,
With all the shades of fire and ice,
Dancing upon the water's surface,
Reflecting something no one else can see,
What a mysery,
The scorched sky,
The horizon disappears with the sun,
Hills merge into the mist,
The serenity stalls time,
I am captured in a masterpiece.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-06-25 06:15 PM

Oh, what a beautiful still life!

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2004-06-25 06:27 PM

nice write very beautiful

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2004-06-25 06:44 PM

I'm imagining... very pretty!

miscellanea

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-06-25 07:49 PM

Perfection is in the eye of the beholder.
Much applause...to let us see beyond the surface.
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-06-26 04:38 AM

beautiful!

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