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Ku'uipo
Junior Member
since 2003-09-25
Posts 42


0 posted 2004-06-25 04:38 PM



I never knew crimson could shine so bright,
Irredescent almost invisible color,
It burns my eyes,
Steady glow,
The ocean becomes a living canvas,
With all the shades of fire and ice,
Dancing upon the water's surface,
Reflecting something no one else can see,
What a mysery,
The scorched sky,
The horizon disappears with the sun,
Hills merge into the mist,
The serenity stalls time,
I am captured in a masterpiece.

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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-06-25 06:15 PM


Oh, what a beautiful still life!
Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2004-06-25 06:27 PM


nice write very beautiful

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


miscellanea
Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
3 posted 2004-06-25 06:44 PM


I'm imagining... very pretty!

              miscellanea

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2004-06-25 07:49 PM


Perfection is in the eye of the beholder.
Much applause...to let us see beyond the surface.
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2004-06-26 04:38 AM


beautiful!
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