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Open Poetry #32

Being WithYou

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-06-25 01:44 PM

Your eyes how the glister
inside my soul as your hands touch mine.
The secrets you keep inside
for only a few special people to know,
I feel blessed to be one of them.

The way you look at me
as if I'm the only one in the world.
Your gentle touch how it awakens my heart.
Sleep I sleep in quiet slumber of happiness as I
lay beside you... My love.. My heart.. My gift
from god,I will always love you

very rough draft needs editing other then that what do you all think?

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-06-25 02:07 PM

a good love poem

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2004-06-25 05:53 PM

Thank you

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