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Open Poetry #32
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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2004-06-25 01:44 PM



Your eyes how the glister
inside my soul as your hands touch mine.
The secrets you keep inside
for only a few special people to know,
I feel blessed to be one of them.

The way you look at me
as if I'm the only one in the world.
Your gentle touch how it awakens my heart.
Sleep I sleep in quiet slumber of happiness as I
lay beside you... My love.. My heart.. My gift
  from god,I will always love you


very rough draft needs editing other then that what do you all think?

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-06-25 02:07 PM


a good love poem
Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2004-06-25 05:53 PM


Thank you
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