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garysgirl
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0 posted 2004-06-25 12:04 PM


    

~*~
Of this helplessness in times I feel
As if my trouble I will fall under
When circumstance seems to overcome
My mind in turmoil and wonder

When I feel as if I am sinking
And under pressure am drowning
When my happy seems to be gone
All is found is my face frowning

I try my best to keep standing
For your voice I hear in my head
Telling me to hold on a little longer
I think of encouraging words you have said

You tell me in words filled with love
You will always be there, will never leave
And never the bond of our entwined hearts break
As our lives together we lovingly weave
~*~

© Copyright 2004 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2004-06-25 12:42 PM


Hopeful and sweet Ethel.

Just like you!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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2 posted 2004-06-25 01:42 PM


sounds perfect
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3 posted 2004-06-25 01:52 PM


Such devotion shown here Ethel..just lovely.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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4 posted 2004-06-25 01:58 PM


This is so beautiful, my friend... and yes... apart is tough... we just have to remember those entwined hearts until arms can reach again. *S*
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5 posted 2004-06-25 02:48 PM


Words Woven with love and devotion Ethel

Hope

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6 posted 2004-06-25 02:53 PM


Thank you all so much for your understanding words.
You all don't know how much they mean to me.
I appreciate all of you so very much.....

And, Dixie???? No, my friend....mine and Gary's
circumstances are  FAR  from perfect. Perfection
doesn't happen when two people in love are apart.
With love and heart hugs to all of you,
Ethel

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7 posted 2004-06-25 04:25 PM


This was beautiful, Ethel!   .......jo
Susan
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8 posted 2004-06-25 09:11 PM


You are so blessed to have such love and support.  Thanks for sharing your heart, it is most uplifting.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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9 posted 2004-06-26 08:02 PM


Mama said there'd be days like this....
but you're fortunate to have someone there
for you,
in both good times and bad.

You're all heart Ethel~  *Hugs*

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10 posted 2004-06-26 08:10 PM


Through distance your bodies may not be able to entwine, but that certainly doesn't prevent your two loving souls from doing so!

The separations must must be so difficult for both of you. But I do believe that the day will come when you never have to say "Good-bye" to each other ever again!

In the meantime, know that you are not alone in your separateness. You are still as one!

Loving hugs to both you and Gary,
Linda

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11 posted 2004-06-26 09:46 PM


enjoyed
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12 posted 2004-06-26 09:54 PM



There's my Ethel...full of love...

so very nice.

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13 posted 2004-06-27 01:45 PM


GG,
How tender is the heart that loves and
lucky is the man to whom you refer.

Enjoyed much.

SG

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