Open Poetry #32 |
Night of Living Hell |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+ I had a restless night last night, For I tossed and twisted and turned. I could not drift into a peaceful sleep, As the mid-of-nite-oil burned. All the trials of my loved ones, And those of mine as well, Kept reeling through my mind, In a night of living hell. At 3 AM, my flashing clock, Caught my bleary eyes. I sat bolt up and saw a Light, Which glowed and grew in size. While bathed in glorious rays, A calm came over me. I knew my worrying was in vain, For what will be, will be. I closed my eyes and fell asleep, In to a sweet repose. I awoke this morn, with joy in my heart, For clutched in my hand, was a rose! +*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+ |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"While bathed in those glorious rays, A calm came over me. I knew my worrying was in vain, For what will be, will be." I recently had this happen to me too...but I was on an airplane! enjoyed this |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
What a sweet story gal.....(no, I'm not going write something naughty or silly, just that it's a great write)......................................................................................................................................................well, I could say instead of a rose in your hand that....oh, never mind....sweet write gal...ya done good! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful, uplifting, inspiring write Linda.. So very much enjoyed. Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Linda, this one actually gave me chills. I've felt this before many times. That kind of peace and calm is what we all need. Hugs to you, my friend........ and send me some peace and light..... Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Linda, really, really wonderful rose of a poem. You know how much I like it, without a doubt! your lily lady sends hugs |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
EA, Wonderful write. Sleep well for there are many guardian angels out there looking over you. SG |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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SEA ~ Experiences such as ours have a profound impact on our lives! Love & Light, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Toe ~ Oh my! Even this reply had your signature Toe Twist at the conclusion! Keeps life interesting! Kiss on the cheek, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Nancy ~ I enjoy giving your wings a little added lift! Love & Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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garysgirl ~ My darlin' l'il Ethel Mae, I'm sending you a whole cloud load of peace & Light!!! Linda Lou |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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iliana ~ I graciously accept your lauds, Lily Lady! Big Huggums, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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SG ~ Thank you! ~ and may a host of Guardian Angels watch over you whilst you sleep each nite! Peaceful slumbering! EA |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And may there be many more roses clutched within your hand. Such a positive and inspiring write. Thanx Linda. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Well written and shows the struggle. I don't know that I'd want to wake up with a rose in my hand though because in sleep everything of mine is clenched so I know I'd wake up with thorns gouging my skin. However it did add a fragrance to the poem. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
While bathed in glorious rays, A calm came over me. I knew my worrying was in vain, For what will be, will be. I closed my eyes and fell asleep, In to a sweet repose. I awoke this morn, with joy in my heart, For clutched in my hand, was a rose! ~*~ Sometimes we have to experience the thorn of the touch before we can grasp the rose in full... I know these dreams... I'm glad you do, too... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Magnus ~ Thank you, gallant Barry! Roses make the world so much sweeter! Big morning hug, Linda |
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Kethry ~ Well helloooo there, Dear Keth! I hear ya! lol ~ But this was a rose without thorns! If it had been a thorny one, there would have been blood dripping from my hand and there would have been a frozen scream on my face! That would have put a whole different spin on my night's experience! lol Good to hear from you! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Sunshine ~ ...I knew that you would know... Kindred hugs, Linda |
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