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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-06-24 08:52 AM

I rode behind you
on purpose
but you wore handles
for my hands
by accident

you noticed the tree of me
liked the valley of you
so we explored the fitting
making research noises
in the leaves

I remember you looking
up my tall
like I was a sky
and I felt your hand
where I dreamed

I tasted copper flavors
there were streams hidden
that told stories
day was under my jean bark
you left your handprints

on my memory skin

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Dark

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-06-24 08:59 AM

Dark Stranger,
Reads sexy to me. LOL

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2004-06-24 09:31 AM

Making research noises...sounds like fun.

And you are the sky, Mr. Stranger.

~K~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2004-06-24 09:49 AM

as always sir.. well done

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2004-06-24 10:36 AM

you noticed the tree of me
liked the valley of you
so we explored the fitting
making research noises
in the leaves

I remember you looking
up my tall
like I was a sky
and I felt your hand
where I dreamed
==========================

I have to agree with my Sy-guy. lol

me thinks the leaves were blushing

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2004-06-24 01:13 PM

Goodness....*fanning myself*

Cold shower anyone??

Dang fine write.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-06-24 01:16 PM

...saxxy write Dark..
sizzle of summer is back.
*smiling at you*

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2004-06-29 12:14 PM

You do this so very well....you're someone I need to read.

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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2004-06-29 12:23 PM

very very well conceived and written, my friend.

jwesley

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-06-29 04:04 AM

nice, yes

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2004-06-29 05:04 PM

and I felt your hand
where I dreamed

ahuh...I feel this.

Sexy indeed!

M

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

11 posted 2004-07-10 10:10 PM

As always I LOVE your style and way with words, this is a sensual stunner and worthy of applause and a sigh....

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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