»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #32
»
Burning Rubber
| Open Poetry #32 |
|
Burning Rubber |
|
|
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
|
~*~*~ 'Tis the season of change the Spring of 2004 and it's time to move on to where, I don't know, I don't know where to go. The road stretches long burning rubber despising the smell, where fumes rise like angry tears melting the asphalt. Divided, black and blue each mile a marker without direction counting the days however much time give or take. From here to there and years from now I'll straigten it out but I'm scared to cross the line afraid I'll bottom out. And if I do I won't turn around or look in the mirror to see if you'll follow I'll just drop off and take it from there as faraway as I can. Sorry folks, but tonight, there is no light~ ugh!! |
||
| © Copyright 2004 BluesSerenade - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a theme close to home for me...but you knew that |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
can see this the way you drive (grin) highways are the best lovers they are endless and most of the time you don't have to come back (old harley proverb I think) enjoyed this Bluzzzzzy |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade, No light but a good write.  |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You'll straighten it out, Lori... will try to catch up wth you later if you are on...was a very tiring day yesterday, probably for the both of us. Hugs till then M |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Not a very nice place to be ~ I know! ~ I've been there! I believe that I would have healed more quickly and with less scars if I could have written my feelings down at that time, as you now have! Write that man right out of your hair, Lovely Lori! Big, warm hug!!! Linda |
||
Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lori~ heart hugsss this seemed a little darker, in complete understanding....there is a light you will find it.....heart hugssss  ~~**~~ |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and it's time to move on to where, I don't know, I don't know where to go. ========================= ya know what the moth says... when in doubt.... head for the beach.  ... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ... |
||
|
James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I'm sorry too..... wish I could make it better. As for me, I'm much fonder of this kind of burning rubber ~~ /main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayprivate&number=59&topic=000207 |
||
|
Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I have driven that path before. I enjoyed this one, Blue. |
||
|
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you all.... the cross roads seem long, and a bit treacherous, but I will get there yet. Until then, warm hugs all around~ |
||
|
Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
"We hold these truths to be sacred & undeniable; that all men are created equal & independent, that from that equal creation they derive rights inherent & inalienable, among which are the preservation of life, & liberty, & the pursuit of happiness." -- Thomas Jefferson  Go in hot pursuit! |
||
|
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you Reb, I shall heed your advice and go in hot pursuit, I can do that. I saw one of those white washed signs at an antique store the other day that read, "a summer place" so I bought it to hang in my new place, when I get there..... I've had the song in my head ever since. (Probably not much of a compliment to you or Thomas) And the sweet secret of a summer place is that it's anywhere when two people share all their hopes all their dreams all their love.... You are such a nice man, thank you again~ |
||
|
Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
bluesy, writing does seem to burn off some of the hurt i think. I wish i would have discovered it when i needed it. I'm glad you have, and you continue to write. Your writing expressed well. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
