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Words are Picks
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Words are Picks My words are picks that dart the strings That tricks the heart to thinking things Rings the noon with mellow swoon And jewels the yellow of the moon They turn into the birds of cry That flies the winds in mental sigh To hue the sky in amber clouds That falls beneath horizons shrouds They play a song in longings key The symmetry of key of be Sending echoes into walls Crying back in sigh recalls They feed the fire to keep it bright To stay the ashes lost to sight To warm the heart this ebbing shoal To hold the seed within its soul I pick the words to fly like bird In hopes they are forever heard |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My words are picks that dart the strings That tricks the heart to thinking things Rings the noon with mellow swoon And jewels the yellow of the moon ================================= Oh you aint neva lied!!!!  SY!!!!?????!!!! Do you know how COOL that verse is???!!! I am giddy at your word play, internal rymes and imagery... YOU ROCK my groovy Rhyme King... you rock and it rolls me.  *ww*    |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I pick the words to fly like bird In hopes they are forever heard Seymour, your words always hold such wisdom. Thank you for sharing them. Hugs, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Believe me Sy, your words will be forever heard.. and may they continue to warm many hearts for a very very long time. Beautiful morning read,...much enjoyed. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mornin', T-Man! Well this is one reader ~ and fan! ~ whose harp strings you pick in the most delightful of ways ~ and on a daily basis!  Poetically pick away, Dear Poet! You are so ding dang creative with your writes! Summer morning huggums, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-24-2004 11:24 AM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
you write many words that fly into our memories flying high with the birds, seymour enjoyed bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
They feed the fire to keep it bright To stay the ashes lost to sight To warm the heart this ebbing shoal To hold the seed within its soul  keep em coming kiddo, liked a lot |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Seymour, i'm always amazed at how tight your poems are. think that's a difficult feat to achieve for rhyming poetry? |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "My words are picks that dart the strings That tricks the heart to thinking things" Indeed they are/do! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You are the cool that warms my heart And even the Randy part. WWRS Ethel, You are a sweetheart. Nancy, You turn me to a bowl of jello. Hugs Earth Angel And you are an Angel disguised as a person. vandana Thank you dear. bslicker, Thank you my friend. passing, Nice is good. LeeJ, Thank you, you are sweet. kaile Thank you for the nice comp. Martie Indeed they do. Hugs |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"My words are picks that dart the strings That tricks the heart to thinking things" Yes, they are! Really wonderful poem, Seymour! BEEEEEEEE well ....hehehe  ......jo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You sure are our little "Rhymin Hood", and to think that I missed seeing you darting around in your tights too. Nancy Lee is right Sy, you words are forever to so many of us. Love ya m'friend and hi to Isabel - you too! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I love how your words create the world that shows the world words can create. Much enjoyed. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you dear I try. Sharon, Hi back sweety and thanks for the read and comment. Susan Cute enjoyed your comment. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Always and a day, Sy... always. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you sweet. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Seymour, You lift my heart when I read your poetry. I love the movement of your writing. SG |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Seymour Your words are always so very well received and so much appreciated. We are so fortunate that you share so much with us. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SimplyGold And I love your beautiful comments Suetang Thank you sweet. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hello Seymour. It has been a long time my friend since last I visited your poetry. What an IDIOT I am. Heck this is wonderful. I love the way you meld rhyme and meter so much. You message is bright and cheerful and DANG I am jealous. I love this poem my friend. Love it with all that I have in my heart. You are such a wonderful writer my friend. You have a gift for turning a gray sky blue. (Note to self--When feeling down visit Seymour's poetry more often!) Thank-you my friend. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
EvocativeVerse2 Now that's one of the nicest replies I've had in a long time. |
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