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PKreturns
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0 posted 2004-06-21 01:43 PM


She speaks in lines of affection
Her words written for close inspection
Mysteries within the mind they tell
Gossamer stories she tells so well
The heart pours forth a torrent
Of drowning in waves love spent
And beneath her sentences, a whispered plea
Breathed in my ear, only for me
My eyes to trace in slow repeat
Her curves and lines in frozen heat
To become immortal this way
Within moods of swoon and sway
If only she could somehow see
That she is all I read, she is poetry


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Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-06-21 01:47 PM


Very very beautiful and so much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

PKreturns
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2 posted 2004-06-21 01:51 PM


Thank you, Nancy.
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2004-06-21 01:52 PM


Hi, PK! What a perfect love match! She IS poetry and you WRITE poetry ~ and very well at that!


EA

Constance
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4 posted 2004-06-21 02:09 PM


This is absolutely lovely. Oh, to be so loved as to inspire words like these!
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2004-06-21 04:41 PM


This is a most beautiful caress of mind and thought.
TD

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6 posted 2004-06-21 11:18 PM


good grief...this should come with a warning! It makes a heart skip a beat

"Of drowning in waves love spent
And beneath her sentences, a whispered plea
Breathed in my ear, only for me
My eyes to trace in slow repeat
Her curves and lines in frozen heat
To become immortal this way
Within moods of swoon and sway"


poetic perfection, but then, what else from you?

iliana
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7 posted 2004-06-22 01:00 AM


This is so very beautiful, PK!
passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-06-22 02:27 AM


this describes so many here

wonderful write!

GG
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Lost in thought
9 posted 2004-06-22 08:44 AM


She must be some wonderful poetry...
because you write of her so well
Ah to flow like poetry...
A beautiful thing.

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
                  Joyce kilmer

LeeJ
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10 posted 2004-06-22 08:47 AM


oh how beautiful...a lovely read...I could say these words so resemble many lovely women in PIP....there is a light and divine understanding which flows, regardless of opionion, PIP seems to be rich with compassion and understanding for the need of individual growth.  Lovly wright.
Sunshine
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11 posted 2004-06-28 07:30 PM


Ah, PK...you wrote this for every passionate female poet here...this one feels SO good...a wonderful job, m'friend.
miscellanea
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12 posted 2004-06-28 08:27 PM


Sunshine,
  Don't we wish?  Are you eavesdropping, PK?
Seriously, I'm glad that you've experienced such an inspiration.  
           miscellanea

Suetang
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13 posted 2004-06-28 09:53 PM


Your beautiful words of love left me breathless and were so very much enjoyed by this reader.  I will look forward to reading more.

"Love is the poetry
of the senses"

Take care.....Sue


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Tara Simms Hall
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14 posted 2004-07-09 04:20 PM


Oh, to be a man's poetry!  She'll swoon when she reads this.
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