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She is Poetry
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She is Poetry |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
She speaks in lines of affection Her words written for close inspection Mysteries within the mind they tell Gossamer stories she tells so well The heart pours forth a torrent Of drowning in waves love spent And beneath her sentences, a whispered plea Breathed in my ear, only for me My eyes to trace in slow repeat Her curves and lines in frozen heat To become immortal this way Within moods of swoon and sway If only she could somehow see That she is all I read, she is poetry |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful and so much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Thank you, Nancy. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, PK! What a perfect love match! She IS poetry and you WRITE poetry ~ and very well at that!   EA |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
This is absolutely lovely. Oh, to be so loved as to inspire words like these! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This is a most beautiful caress of mind and thought. TD |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
good grief...this should come with a warning! It makes a heart skip a beat  "Of drowning in waves love spent And beneath her sentences, a whispered plea Breathed in my ear, only for me My eyes to trace in slow repeat Her curves and lines in frozen heat To become immortal this way Within moods of swoon and sway" poetic perfection, but then, what else from you? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is so very beautiful, PK! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this describes so many here wonderful write! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
She must be some wonderful poetry... because you write of her so well Ah to flow like poetry... A beautiful thing. Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh how beautiful...a lovely read...I could say these words so resemble many lovely women in PIP....there is a light and divine understanding which flows, regardless of opionion, PIP seems to be rich with compassion and understanding for the need of individual growth. Lovly wright. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, PK...you wrote this for every passionate female poet here...this one feels SO good...a wonderful job, m'friend. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sunshine, Don't we wish? Are you eavesdropping, PK? Seriously, I'm glad that you've experienced such an inspiration. miscellanea |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your beautiful words of love left me breathless and were so very much enjoyed by this reader. I will look forward to reading more. "Love is the poetry of the senses" Take care.....Sue I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Oh, to be a man's poetry! She'll swoon when she reads this. |
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