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The Art Of Persuasion
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The Art Of Persuasion |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Tell me again your excuses in verses trip up my heart with the fluff of your lies trick me with reasons you often desert me open the book show me what you can find tell me again all the things "I" should do show me with fraud why you can't do the same Rob us again of the things we are needing Show me where God approves of your games if you can... ~Tier |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow. Great write here...ouch.  Enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I'd say this is the art of Persuasion! Very powerful write. Sadelite |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I like the write Tier, just not the premise. But you write it as well as any. Here, have a smile. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
point made  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
powerful indeed Tier. Wonderful! Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Give 'em hell! Kevin "I must be in the front row." |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!!! Eric |
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