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Copperbell
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0 posted 2004-06-20 12:57 PM



The loss of a husband
  And his tender love
A broken divorced heart
Only strengthened her resolve

Those babies would thrive -
Every ounce of strength
was given
to them

There were hungry days
And lonely days
And tired days
And tears

Two decades later,
And two beautiful daughters
With faith enough between them
To change this world

All I can say

   Is Lady

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1 posted 2004-06-20 01:57 PM


Somehow it is always worth it, every single second - lovely tribute.
Kevo
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2 posted 2004-06-20 04:45 PM


Well-done both in writing and rearing your children.  Happy "Father's" Day to you, too.  You were both and should be celebrated as such.  This was a touching read.

Kevin

Copperbell
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3 posted 2004-06-20 06:38 PM


I wrote this about a friend of mine, she has worked so hard for so long, and she has raised two amazing kids.  She truly has held down the fort through many storms of life.

Thank you both for your comments. I'm sure we all know several of these amazing ladies.

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ThUnDeRkYsS
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5 posted 2004-06-21 05:52 PM


I think I'll show this to my mother today.  Today (June 21st) my father will be gone for two years and she's not having the greatest day, perhaps this will cheer her up a bit   Thank you for sharing it with us.

Brian

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Sadelite
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6 posted 2004-06-21 08:41 PM


it can't be easy; I'd admire those who chose this when nothing else positive can be done;
great write!
                 Sadelite

Copperbell
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7 posted 2004-06-26 01:33 PM


I should really share this with the lady I wrote it about.

People live such amazing lives, its such a priviledge to be able to record the beauty of pieces of their lives.  

Brian, may God give your mom a huge abundance of strength


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