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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-06-19 11:06 PM

Dispute as you might of the gifts passed in post
As a daughter will tell you of some more than most
A life’s journey to challenge the construction of norm
Skirt of pretty white cotton soaked transparent in storm

In reflection of absences grown and mature
Puddle jumping the tragedies sweet and demure
In her heart set a seed adoration by mere
That in dormant retained all this time we are here

From her father the seed planted deep in her heart
A creation of earnest condition impart
Simply quiet until the first blossom of love
In a spurt of a heartbeat measured everything of

The comparison striking on a memory note
From the gleam in his eye to words in his throat
An invisible guardian from an angel for sure
From up close or afar that reminder for her

Think it fiction or fancy as you like or you will
More divine in the giving yet on purpose and still
For without that so simple just a twinkle indeed
Then what would a daughter know to keep or to weed

Copyright Kkh 6/19/04

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-06-19 11:16 PM

I had to read this a couple of times. I love your talent with words. Much enjoyed.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-06-20 04:50 AM

another wonderful write

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2004-06-20 12:53 PM

Very nice! Love that puddle jumping line the most!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Kevo
Member

since 2004-06-02

Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA

4 posted 2004-06-20 07:20 PM

A very touching poem, indeed. A great tribute. You are so gifted in your words and your writing. rhyming is a gift you do very well without ever sounding like you forced the issue. It just flows and rolls right down the paper. Superb. A real keeper.

Kevin

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2004-06-20 10:04 PM

your adoration shines through from daddy's little girl

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