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Fariegirl
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 147


0 posted 2004-06-19 03:39 PM



I helped you hear the rain,
I helped you love the trees,
I helped you taste the stream,
I helped you feel the breeze.

I helped you to believe,
I helped you to know,
I helped you to come,
I helped you to go.

I helped you to win,
I helped you to try,
I helped you to smile,
I helped you to cry.

I helped you do everything,
I helped you to be,
When will someone choose,
To start helping me?

~*Faries exist.*~

© Copyright 2004 Kathryn Duncan - All Rights Reserved
Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
1 posted 2004-06-19 03:47 PM


nicely expressed

The fear I see when I look in your eyes makes you believe I'm one of a kind

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2004-06-19 08:22 PM


sometimes you need to ask, as you just did
Jaime Fradera
Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable
3 posted 2004-06-19 08:58 PM


This touched me very deeply …
I know it was meant for everyone, but it was so easy to imagine it was personally for me …
This is what they call participation mystique.


GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
4 posted 2004-06-20 12:13 PM


Well expressed, and...
I hope the ones you need to help you, will...
soon.

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
                  Joyce kilmer

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2004-06-20 04:51 AM


I understand this feeling well
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