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Appeal Long and Lingered
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Appeal Long and Lingered |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You seem in ragged shell That turns my heart upon the walk away An ancient call that set it’s mark another day We share a river here So fine the tribute infinite and clear The sound of bottomless refrains Searching us in sacrament and certainty Two seas of one soul defy diversity Pouring out of lucent pictures Capturing of loves most potent mixtures The soft of me responds And grand façade escapes the drapes Thought hard and dark but mitigates Emotions that belong to us in trade That resonates in refuge yet by heart displayed And I would wrap you in my arms Keep the chill away that senses disobey Your hand my guide and by your side to lay For found the caverns languished in a twilight chaste And there resounds your voice to echo in its place Copyright Kkh 4/20/04 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"And I would wrap you in my arms Keep the chill away that senses disobey Your hand my guide and by your side to lay For found the caverns languished in a twilight chaste And there resounds your voice to echo in its place" Wonderful write Kathleen.. And this last stanza? WOW!! Hugs sweet poetess~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very interesting write. Sounds of want and desire, yet uncomfortable with a display of your true intentions, willing if the feelings are mutual, but also willing to remain as two separate seas sharing the earth, yet separate bodies. Not sure. Maybe I’m reading too much into this. I enjoyed the read. Very nice write. JL |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A beautiful resonance of love. Love, Margherita  |
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