Seymour Tabin
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2004-04-20
07:17 AM
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My Staff
My staff is made of humble wood A piece of tree where life once stood It aids me on my path of wear The things that I would do and dare
It lights my fire, tends my sheep And is my strength when I’m asleep It keeps me steady when I walk And is my friend when strangers talk
But even stone will wear in time Beneath the bear of age and grime And wood is no exception to The wear and tear that comes to you
We all wear down into the ground Where every living form is found It is on which all change will dine Within the brew and aqua line
So if you would the slow and quick Make sure you have a walking stick
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Toerag
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Ala bam a
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2004-04-20
07:31 AM
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If Clinton would have stuck to this kind of "staff"...his reputation would have been far more appealing....this is one of your best Sy....I enjoyed...(I know, you thought I was really going to write something off color about this didn't ya?)
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-04-20
07:40 AM
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Toe, LOL You have a mind like a Porcupine.
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
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2004-04-20
09:05 AM
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LOL@Toe! Excellent morning write Sy guy! Have a wonderful day. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~To have lived the dream of a love so true... is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.
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Janet Marie
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2004-04-20
09:06 AM
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My staff is made of humble wood A piece of tree where life once stood It aids me on my path of wear The things that I would do and dare
================================ But even stone will wear in time Beneath the bear of age and grime
================================= We all wear down into the ground Where every living form is found It is on which all change will dine Within the brew and aqua line =================================
your rhymes are made from the same humility and humanity as your walking stick... your poetry keeps the pace and keeps us on the right path.
*ww* :
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LeeJ
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2004-04-20
09:07 AM
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But even stone will wear in time Beneath the bear of age and grime And wood is no exception to The wear and tear that comes to you
so very true...good morning to ya kiddo Wishing you a fine day
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-04-20
09:57 AM
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Nancy, Thank you sweet.
JM, So what else is new? LOL WWRS
LeeJ And a fine day to you darlen.
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Sunshine
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2004-04-20
10:05 AM
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We had a heck of a wind through our neck of the woods over the weekend, Sy...and believe it or not, I took one of those deadwood limbs and have planned to use it as my own walking stick...
once again, m'friend, your timing is impeccable. But then, your dapperness is always appealing!
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MGROVES
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california
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2004-04-20
10:10 AM
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enjoyed this write this am.
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-04-20
10:10 AM
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Sunshine You are as spring unto my mind.
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-04-20
10:19 AM
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MGROVES So glad you liked.
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SEA
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with you
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2004-04-20
10:20 AM
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this made me think of my dad, he uses a walking stick, and it's beautiful.... enjoyed this
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Earth Angel
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2004-04-20
10:28 AM
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Happy Spring morning, Mr. T.!
Your staff serves you well! You walk with dignity and grace! Your step is strong and steady ~ and on the ready!
Wood, I mean "would" you tell your little Earthy Angel, where I might find such a tree from which I could fashion a flying stick?
Loved your poem! Love you! EA
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-04-20
12:24 PM
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SEA Enjoyed your reply, hugs.
Earth Angel, OK but you have to be careful, there are those for Angels and those for witches. LOL
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Ericc
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2004-04-20
02:48 PM
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Perfectly lyrical!
Eric
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-04-20
03:30 PM
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Thank you Ericc
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Earth Angel
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2004-04-20
04:17 PM
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Oh, I see! Well what if I am a bewitching angel ~ or an angelic witch?
Huggums, EA
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-04-20
04:56 PM
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Earth Angel Or both. LOL
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