Open Poetry #32 |
A master of the Blade |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
An Arnis Master Like a blade Forged of finest steel Integrity worked into strength Beautiful at rest Deadly with intent So you are to me-- As I watch you move Working the blade Smooth in flow of form Swift in precision An art come to life A passion in play And I inhale in awe At your mastery And when you come to rest You smile, And you are . . . you, Simply like me Yet everything I hope to become Flowing in Arnis S.A.T. Dedicated to my instructor, Greg (the grasshopper) by his ever faithful student - the bunny. Arnis is a Filipino Martial Art which uses weapons. It is said that blade teaches stick teaches hand. Thus the student begins by learning to work with steel. To see this art performed by a master is to have ones breath stolen by the beauty of the motion and the mastery. The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful dedication |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
You can see the admiration..good poem..thank you... Goldenrose. ''Death where is thy sting? Love where is thy glory?'' William Shakespeare. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
An amazing expression, this....quick and beautiful, like a martial art is. You truly caught the essence with this. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, I believe the art could steal away one's breath, as the master skillfully cleaves the air with practiced strokes... Would be fascinating to watch. Thanx Susan. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
wow. This is a beautiful picture |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks so much for reading and commneting. I sometimes wonder how my other self will be recieved, but the art is a passion of mine and inspires me to write. Hugs -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Susan, to see you wield your words is like, I imagine, you seeing your teacher! ....jo |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
jo, thanks so much for your sweet words. Hugs -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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