Open Poetry #32 |
The Arts Female |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Alone in the mirror of your thoughts Succumb this man made self restraint Ruffles and lace, just accents to stir the mind Yet created raw a wonder best defined That my heart has chosen you Rejoicing in the beauty I was born into My hands grow light in touch Tracing your name upon my own skin Undiscovered country where none have ever been Tropics and mountain peaks, majestic Unique the blushes of supple rushes Along the laze of journey’s blaze Pinks and reds…moist and lush of wilderness spreads All seasons and all dreams combined in color blind The arch of delicate to lift to heavens muse the hues In turn along the soft of winding roads and painted toes Defiant of time…scented lily white and polished shine The muscle tone of tigress poised to hunt at dawn A quiet strength that lingers on Seduction in as much as dreams are chaste and slept upon The child that sparkles in a vibrant heart to surface at the shore of see The most that I had ever hoped to be…myself as dear you are to me Copyright Kkh 6/17/04 |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
There is such sensuality in this, though I am uncertain that its truth speaks to me, I can interpret it in several different ways. Still, on a deeper level, I can feel its breath stirring. Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Definitely sensual undertoe with suggestive impressionism woven through the seems of observational desire... Most alluring. -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I to agree with both comments above, adding, that you are tracing the universe with your new understanding...and selective choices...good one. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Kathleen... Softly sensual...much enjoyed. Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, how lovely TD !! A keeper for sure. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I only wish I could write like this |
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