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the prayer |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
where are the wise words of the wordsmith now? in the face of this dark suffering where is the pith of wisdom? suddenly the heart is raw engaged in battle with God enraged by the choice of who the sufferer should be. if one word would ease the pain a mite, then how much easing would ten thousand words gain? would epics by score give rise to cures of malady? would then the poet be the healer? these worthless words written cannot take away the pain nor the darkness and yet this is all I have to offer these words these hollow words speaking of faith and perseverance echoing quietly in the night as you lay there awake in your thoughts waiting for pearls of wisdom that cannot be written words fail me my lack of words will fail you but I feel your pain ‘tis often so lay your head here take my hand I will share what I can and help you through this night of pain and suffering and darkness I will write my poetry with the beat of my heart and give to you the poem of life [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (06-17-2004 09:17 PM).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I felt every word here Sharon. beautifully expressed.  Maree. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
deVine One... this is magnificent... felt through and through. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sharon, I want some of whatever you're reading... this is beautiful! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
suddenly the heart is raw engaged in battle with God enraged by the choice of who the sufferer Should be. these worthless words written cannot take away the pain nor the darkness and yet this is all I have to offer lay your head here take my hand I will share what I can and help you through this night of pain and suffering and darkness I will write my poetry with the beat of my heart and give to you the poem of life Dear Lord! That simply has to be enough, it truly does. I am SO angry I can not even begin to sort it out, and yet you can write out what I too feel - so thank you. I will add my thoughts to your prayer, and also in my own way pray it is enough. That truly was seeing your raw pain, Sharon, and knowing that these words came straight from the heart. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is without a doubt, the most personal poem I've seen from you yet. Poignant and full of your caring artistry. More later, when I have time. I WILL be back to this one--on the level of a jeremiad, m'lady. awesome outpour. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I will write my poetry with the beat of my heart and give to you the poem of life Beautiful PdV. enjoyed. Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
PDV, your absolute best |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sharon, this is you writing at your very best. Excellent dear friend..excellent. Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I was about to say a simple prayer myself, but instead just decided to read this again out loud and know it will be most definitley be heard. Such a window to your soul m'friend. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...such baring of the soul has to speak all the words there are, my friend. My heart to you. jwesley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh my ...just look at this beauty.... How rare that you do free verse...yet we would never know... the heart felt sincerety of this jewel is its true beauty. Superb sharing of verse and spirit poetess Sharon. People come & go in our lives but the memories & poetry remain... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
This is, without a doubt, my favorite of everything I've read of yours (and you have some great stuff!). It's full of compassion and heartache, but also full of the joy of friendship... Amazing poem, Sharom... this'll go in my library. Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
'Da'Vine....this is very well thought out and just a fine example of your wonderful talent gal... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Excellent write, I felt the questioning anger we sometimes feel towards God when we think he's not doing anything to help our loved ones in despair, pain and/or sickness...tis a human thing, to deny the divine and perhaps a test of our faith, b/c when it hits home, we cannot emotionally disconnect. Tremendous compelling write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I return to read again... and to click that library button. *S* |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
beautiful, beautiful...you capture so well not only life, suffering, our relationship with God, our poetic gift of 'words'...and more......wonderfully expressed lady |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for reading. I am saddened because there are so many of our PiP friends who need comfort now. Especially Becky. She was in my heart with I wrote this. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sharon, you do free verse well, so beautifully. P.S. ~ Did you get my email last week in regards to an oldie of yours? ...email me at canadahoneybee@hotmail.com Thanks, Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sharon, words have not failed you, even tho' to you they seem inadequate. There is so much love and empathy in your poetic heart. This prayer has reached many ears ~ and most importantly He who has Ears divine...  God bless you and your loved one. Healing hugs, Linda |
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