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Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-06-17 12:15 PM

Ink flows to paper
awash in a river blue
a poet's heart speaks

S.A.T.

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-06-17 12:33 PM

well done! and beautiful

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-06-17 02:17 PM

Earth Angel, loving
Wings outstretched to keep us warm
Fluttering heartbeats

~*~

Susan, you did so well
you inspired me to add
to this lovely senryu.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-06-17 02:31 PM

Thank you passing shadows.

'tis most lovely, Sunshine.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2004-06-17 03:36 PM

Susan, we truly are kindred spirits! I just posted a poem about letting the ink flow and I hadn't even read this poem of yours!

Yep, it's true! Great minds do think alike! lol

This is lovely! Truly is! ~ and I feel so honoured! Thank you!

It's fun stretching our poetic wings!

HUGE HUG,
Linda
Susan's Mentor lol

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2004-06-17 03:39 PM

Oh, my goodness! I just read Sunshine's thoughtful poem for me in her reply! The day is just full of surprises and presents for me!

Thank you Dear Glorious Orb of Light! Again you added some sunshine to my day!

Huge Hug,
Linda

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2004-06-17 04:25 PM

I like this very much... well done! *S*

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2004-06-17 04:28 PM

perfect Susan! hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-06-17 04:44 PM

Earth Angel, you make me smile. Big hugs to you.

Suthern, thank you so much for your kind words.

Chris, big hug back atcha.

Love -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

9 posted 2004-06-17 05:18 PM

EXCELLENT SENYRU!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2004-06-17 11:08 PM

VAS, I courtsey in acceptance of your applause. Most kind. Thank you so much.

Big Smile here -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

11 posted 2004-06-18 02:20 AM

well done!

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

12 posted 2004-06-18 04:19 AM

beautifully done...

jwesley

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

13 posted 2004-06-18 03:19 PM

Kaile and jwesley, thank you so much.

susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

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