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Lonely
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Lonely |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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My loneliness knows no degree it haunts the better part of me in darkness now, my soul does live with almost nothing left to give. This cloud of gray surrounds my heart while every day it pulls apart and though you had to say goodbye with all my breath, I wonder why. I call you now to bring me home to love, to live inside my poem it's in your hands, my artists muse come here, there's nothing left to lose.. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
be lonely no more there poetress good write bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Where have you and your illustrious muse been hiding?!? Well, at least you are now both back and in fine form!  Nice to read you both again!  Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a melancholy write Sandra.... But oh so good to have you home. Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A heartfelt plea....may it touch deeply the heart of all who read it...**hugs** |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Yes it was incredibly touching and beautiful. Crafted with impassioned heart. Well done. You write incredibly well. This is another great write. Thank you for allowing me to read it. Kevin |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I could have written this, but not as beautifully  I understand |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow! I hope who ever this is written for or to sees this. Great poem. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
catalinamoon A lovely melancholy write. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
So poignant...beautiful write. Eric |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is an outstanding poem. I'd like to keep in my library and send it to a read, may I? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thank you all, its been awhile since I have been able to write, so I appreciate the reading. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I took away the n and put a v in the word in your poem and you became lovely not lonely...enjoyed...James |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sandra Your words touched me deeply. It is always nice to see you and to read the words from your heart. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah Sandra Don't be lonely dear friend. I do know this feel all to well. Hugs and as always am here if you need me! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
catalinamoon, I am sure we all know this loneliness, you show it to us so vividly and well dear friend, one should never be lonely in ones own company, for when that happens so does sadness, I hope you find your muse and company of joy. Loved the poem and felt the inner pain. Sincerely Rick |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Home is where the heart is ... ... and a lovely heart you have!! * S |
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