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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2004-06-17 10:05 AM

alive
yes
barely dragging myself along
didn't slice to see the pulsing red
but who cares about the beat when there's no song,
just soap suds and cotton fuzz in my head
and not a drop to drink
or a dream’s linger to think
just a cloister dark to see
alive,
yes
barely.

Gloom

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-06-17 10:07 AM

Huggles sent your way...

Profound write

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2004-06-17 10:09 AM

One more night to make it through. Hope the day comes soon. I love the way you bring the poem full circle.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-06-17 11:53 AM

and not a drop to drink
or a dream’s linger to think
just a cloister dark to see

~*~

but alive enough
to relate...

well done, Sir.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-06-17 11:55 AM

Oh, Gloomy guy, now it's not all that bad, is it? Hope not. Here's a hug to pick you up -- *hug*. Much enjoyed the flow of words, just sad.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2004-06-17 11:59 AM

Professor,
There is much to see in the night. Enjoyed

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

6 posted 2004-06-18 09:04 AM

Professor,
You write so very, very well of it! I hope things are going well and this is just your pen speaking... I hope you have a good Friday and yes, weekend--it's almost here! HIp HIP hoo RAYs!
Sadelite

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-06-22 11:53 AM

You don't need to slice to see pulsing red...

I feel it in the words.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-06-22 12:31 PM

and it goes on and on and on...

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

9 posted 2004-06-22 12:34 PM

Gloom...
you leave me in awe...and thats a hard thing to do dear.
*bows to you*

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make you bleed it isn't worth it"-alibaster

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