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Open Poetry #32

Without You

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2004-06-17 01:48 AM

I'm cold.
Yearning for the feel of warmth.
Yearning for the feel of his hands, of his arms, wrapped tight around me.
Dying to hear his voice, wanting to see his face.
Can I make it one more day without love, without him?

I'm lonely.
Aching for the feel of love,
yearning for the feel of want,
hoping for the feel of him.
Dying to touch his hair, wanting to kiss his lips.
How long do I have left to go without love, without him?

I'm sad.
Wanting to see his calves,
aching to feel his back,
yearning to see his chest.
Dying to see him smile, hoping to hold his hand.
When will it be over, my without love, without him?

The crow and the raven are making me sad.
They don't have to yearn, or to ache, to want, to hope, or to die.
I'm the one left barely alive and hoping for love, hoping for him.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2004-06-17 03:30 PM

I know these feelings very well... You've written with clarity the ache that can be overwhelming.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2004-06-17 07:15 PM

Keep hoping, because there's lots of men hoping too and someday there will be a connection...James

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2004-07-05 02:31 AM

thankx everyone for your lovely comments

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