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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Here's a new song I wrote in the process of moving, about the feeling you get when moving and it feels like everything is flying by and happening so fast everything you see feels so strange, and it all seems to bleed together.) Yellow Tinted Windows By: Noah Eaton 6/9/04 Flashing before your eyes, what a pleasant suprise, swimming with eyes wide open, and you can see, diamond air trap, in there you breathe, only on the surface, feel the crizzling. Daydreams still impaled, the electric sunshine, bleeds into your face, sojourning between, a home you've found, and a home you've left behind. Living an endless summer, behind yellow tinted windows, stippling all which you already are, into all you want to be. Reclining your head, on the breakfast table, watching shadows of youth, jump-rope with pink fairy floss, annealing in, the shade of the gaffer, who helped you interpret, the light in your eyes Daydreams still impaled, the electric sunshine, bleeds into your face, as you arabesque, between a home you've found, and a home you've left behind. Living an endless summer, behind yellow tinted windows, stippling all which you already are, into all you want to be, into all you want to be... Living an endless summer, behind yellow tinted windows, stippling all which you already are, into all you want to be. Each and every day, it breaks away, you're too warm for viscosity, in the corner of your eye, behind the intaglio, you'll always be a bit homesick... "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, Noah. You most likely will feel homesick but it will be less painful as you make a new home for yourself. Remember, You are "Living an endless summer, behind yellow tinted windows, stippling all which you already are, into all you want to be" ~ that is going to be something even more awesome than you already are! It sure seemed strange seeing Oregon as your home instead of Colorado! Life is full of change! Enjoyed your song! Some day I'll actually be hearing you sing these beauties!  Angel huggums, Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Living an endless summer, behind yellow tinted windows, stippling all which you already are, into all you want to be, into all you want to be..." Oh, Noah, do I know these feelings. Good write!  ......jo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah, my friend... you handle moving with much more grace than I managed. *S* /pip/Forum37/HTML/000714.html I like this very much... it's great to see you posting again!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
HEY NOAH! I am just southwest of Portland, in McMinnville! BTW, have you been to Powell's bookstore yet? A whole city block full of books! Perhaps we shall bump into one another downtown. I always figured on running into you at Tattered Cover in Denver. LOL, maybe Powell's. I'll be there again in a couple of weeks.  have a fun summer |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hi Noah! Enjoyable write once again. hugs, Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope you're settled in...moving can be stressful...James |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderfuly told Noah! Eric |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
well said Noah - a fitting song to the thoughts feelings and trials of a move - sometimes a new song comes from the joy one learns to feel about their new home - Paul |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
Hey, I really enjoyed this one, yea moving is tough especially when it is from the place you grew up. Is that an Ovation guitar you are holding? Those are nice. C? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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