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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-06-16 08:10 PM

At The End of The Day
(Missing someone)

Everything about her,
that's what I admire.
Her feminine beauty
stirs up my desire.

No doubt about this,
I know that I will
miss her kiss;
the touch, her
sweet response,
the taste of her
succulent lips.

And in the evening
when the sun goes down
as I sit in the darkness
and she's not around,
I'll light a single candle,
to bring her close to me,
to chase any darkness away.
That's what she likes to do
at the end of the day.

JamesLee
June18
2004
Going on a business
trip for a few weeks.
Leaving Saturday...
I have one
that I love.

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (06-17-2004 06:56 PM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2004-06-16 08:17 PM

Wishing you a successful business trip!

~ and a very warm home-coming!

EA

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

2 posted 2004-06-16 09:23 PM

true passion , nice one j

pictureme
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2004-06-16 11:07 PM

written from the heart! Love lives in this poem. Have fun on your business trip and
keep keeping poetry alive!
pictureme :-)

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2004-06-16 11:22 PM

your poems are always filled with such a sweetness.

this is lovely.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-06-17 11:02 AM

How lovely and tender this is. You are a master of this type of poetry.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2004-06-17 11:19 AM

very pretty write

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2004-06-17 11:34 AM

Yes, James, you will miss her. I know that
my Gary and I miss each other so awfully
bad when we are apart from each other. It's
torture not to be together!!
Hugs to you both,
Ethel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-06-17 12:35 PM

James, take care and hurry back!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2004-06-17 07:00 PM

Thank you Earth Angel, aujussy wolf, pictureme, Temptress, Pilgrimage, Lee J, garysgirl and passing shadows for the nice responses and the good wishes...the fly day is getting near...James

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2004-06-18 12:32 PM

"And in the evening
when the sun goes down
as I sit in the darkness
and she's not around,
I'll light a single candle,
to bring her close to me,
to chase any darkness away.
That's what she likes to do
at the end of the day."

JamesLee -- this was such a sweet write, and that last stanza, very, very sweet! Safe travels!

.....jo

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

11 posted 2004-06-25 12:51 PM

i hope you haev a safe trip

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