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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-06-16 08:00 PM



What I'd Love to Do...with You

Remembering that day at Bay
a poet's write for two.
Meeting at the rails on edge
tall, and suave in blue.

To take that walk along our way
Museum arts in sight.
I'd walk those halls with you in arm
each priceless, in delight.

Would love to dance, for just your eyes
and sway my body so.
Closer, moving slow, intense
and watch your eyes in tow.

To picnic and lay out on quilt
in open air, with you.
To sip and taste desires, pure
these moment's wants, a few.

So many things I'd love to share,
But settle I for one,
To remain in thoughts of yours for now
From morn 'til each day's done.


A  ~ Wynters wish...still



"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Magnus
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1 posted 2004-06-16 09:00 PM


Wynter,  If your poetry speaks as strongly
as I read it...I think your wish will  come
true.  Very well written as well..

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2004-06-16 09:41 PM


Reminiscing gives us the opportunity to revisit moments best not forgotten!

~ May you make wonderful memories today for your tomorrows!


Linda

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-06-16 11:08 PM


Would love to dance, for just your eyes
and sway my body so.
Closer, moving slow, intense
and watch your eyes in tow.

love the sensuality of this.  And I like the ending very much, ah to be in our lover's thoughts.

  Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

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