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Kevo
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since 2004-06-02
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Navarro County, Texas, USA

0 posted 2004-06-15 12:59 PM


The Measure Of A Man

Many are the questions that haunt my troubled mind
where the answer stalks incessantly but is often hard to find.

Am I every ounce of the man I strive to be?
Or, shall I be ever measured solely on dignity?

The answer beckons loudly to this burdened spirit lost
to dig beyond the hardened surface of this biting winter frost.

To thaw the fragile words by compassion's tender light
and shelter them from the disparity of every disheartened night.

Deny beyond the twighlight star the foolish pride of those
whose calloused hearts and troubled minds are oft' so quick to close.

The foolish do not wish to bend their will with open ears
to words they know will uncloak the beast and attest to all their fears.

Never tally dignity in itself as much the whole
to truly measure the willing one with ever-tainted soul.

For the true sum of a man is forever found
with his heart in his hand and his feet on the ground.

Heed the words of the answer's call
resounding beyond the hallowed hall.

Beyond barren fields strewn by those
who are left in darkness by the path they chose.

Over majestic mountains and thundering seas
It beckons the willing to rise from their knees.

Cast away the pestilent soil that breeds
disparity's soul upon tainted deeds.

Be then the sum of measured man
who lives beyond his dignity's span.

Copyright, Kevin V. Reese, 2004

© Copyright 2004 Kevin Reese - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-06-15 01:09 PM


Another engrossing write
Thank you for your talent and insight

I believe the measure of a man is in all things not worldly, but more so....
faith and trust, no matter how daunting or painful a command might seem or actually be or what we might have to suffer while our faith is being tested, according to each individuals proposed necessary journey. I also believe to ask questions is to show humbleness, meaning you will never stagnate, but be ever growing, even in old age, you will accept change.

Thank you for the pondering thoughts, for this yet another beautiful write and read.  
You have sparked many a question here.  

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-06-15 04:29 PM


I enjoyed this one.  It has a wonderful title, and is thoughtful and filled with important questions.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2004-06-15 08:01 PM


Nice flow of words...James
Kazm
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4 posted 2004-06-16 08:04 PM


This is the wisdom I expect from a man in a cowboy hat. It is simple and clear, and it is all true. I would buy a hat for myself but on me it would only make people laugh and think I was a tourist.

                                                 Kaz

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2004-06-16 09:01 PM


Kevo
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

Magnus
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6 posted 2004-06-16 09:08 PM


Much wisdom flows from this poem Kev.  You
have done well.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2004-06-16 09:36 PM


"Am I every ounce of the man I strive to be?"


Well, from what I have gathered from reading all of your poetry thus far, I'd say you are ~ and then some!


EA



pictureme
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since 2003-11-28
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Ohio, USA
8 posted 2004-06-16 11:05 PM


I really enjoyed this read!
"For the true sum of a man is forever found
with his heart in his hand and his feet on the ground"
I think these were my favorite lines!
Thanks for sharing this.
pictureme :-)

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