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She Gives Away What She Needs The Most
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She Gives Away What She Needs The Most |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 Somehow I just feel them. Those dark days of need. Those days when she gifts away The very thing she herself needs most. I sit, in shadows and watch, Following her footsteps As if some small child full of Anticipation, giddy with glee, Scuffling along in her sand Of wisdom and words. She flits from light to light, Leaving her dusty trail for all to see. Some will laugh, cry or simply sigh. Each thought is sprinkled with colored tiny bits of love Tasting oh so sweet.  Not a day goes by, not one, I’m not washed clean in her wake. Either in wisps of words only A poet can leave Stirring whispers in a heart, Or heard from the lips of someone Who's load was heavy, Where she stopped to leave Her tear drops of mend. She can send waves of total acceptance Love, and charity over a wanton soul Gifting them the very strength To get through another day, that she herself needs. She doesn’t even seem to know All the answers reside within her. Craving want, and pain have taught her well. Yet ~ she still seems to have more love Than one person really needs, so, She gives away the surplus Because it just feels good today. Today. Giving away the thing you need most is truly a gift worth giving I had something to say about someone so special here in the halls of Passions, and this was the only way I knew how to present to them.I hope you will enjoy it, and if it fits you too, then you go right ahead and claim it, she won't mind I am sure of it  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem has brought several Pipsters to my mind. I hope they read this poem and can see themselves in your loving and appreciative words. I feel as you do but could never have expressed it as eloquently as you have. I was in near tears with the beauty of your poem. I see your own Light shining through this  Love & Light, Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
*sigh* Sharon, this is such a beautiful write. I shall keep this treasure. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I believe I know who this is for  but you do have a way, Mysteria, that you make this comfy blanket of words spread wide, to encompass all poets [yes, even the men...] Thank you for your many gifts. |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
I know someone like this. If she wrote poetry hers would be the same as you describe here. She lives far away but she is near me anyway. I think you must be like her too. Kaz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One of my favorites...James |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon This does sound like you, as well as a few others. A lovey poem and thoughts about someone special.  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You are all so very kind, and yes, I am sure we all know someone like this. I do have to say this particular tribute is a birthday present for one of the kindest people I have ever had the pleasure of meeting, and I mean ever! She ALWAYS has time for you no matter how full her plate is, and I think she will always be that way. You know they type, they will give you the last piece of bread in the basket type, or the last green jelly bean type? I think they are placed here to learn from I suppose? So...if there are any moths by this name in the house ready to step up and take this tiara, c'mon down!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I knew it! From beginning to end, this is Janet Marie. You have captured her spirit in this. Very lovely, Sharon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, She is a dragons moth.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, I think I know who is this for but several also pop into my mind, yay! (does happy dance) This is a most precious and loving tribute to this sweet poetess, sweet friend, God Bless You, I'm so happy to be reading your poetry again, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sharon, Sharon, Sharon, ... what am I gonna do with you Well, first of all I must say thank you... this is such a lovely, sweet, gift. You always say you dont think your poetry is "as good" as other poets...but me thinks you just cant sit that close to your own words...this is so sincere and emotive...how can one not be touched by your words. And? me thinks you give mothyme far too much credit...this poem could so easily be a mirror of you...Mother-kindess of the forums, and so many others of us who have connected thru our words and mutual love of poetry. When you wrote me that email...your words struck me so....its so perfect that a poem should come from your insight and enlightenment. Thank you, so much for this gift of verse Sharon. I am humbled and moved by all the kindess and outpouring for my bday from you all. And..me thinks Im gonna make quite a scene riding my new bike with that Tiara on.. TY  People come & go in our lives but the memories & poetry remain... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You Go Girl!  Mauuuuaaaaahhhhh! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is precious |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sharon, you've captured the essence of giving ... this is a beautiful tribute to Janet Marie, and many others who give so generously of their hearts here as well. As JM says, this piece could be "a mirror of you" as well, my friend. The lady knows whereof she speaks. Happy Birthday JM! Best wishes and hugs to you both, /Kit |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... I should have posted my response before I read all the other responses... for now I'm laughing at the Kiss My Tiara pic!! LOL What a beautiful tribute you've written... this gem sparkles (and is deserved *S*) as much as any tiara could. *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this is a warm and lovely tribute, not to mention, beautiful words from a heart filled with care and kindness. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, yes, wonderful Sharon. Indeed. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Sharon...I had a feeling from the start who this was dedicated to. And, a most beautiful and deserving person she is. Wonderfully said...a keepers..this tribute and JM. ~Hugs to you both~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a generous and loving tribute to Janet Marie and all givers (including you)! Thank you for sharing it with us. ....jo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Glad I came back to see that tiara!!!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This mirrors so many poets at Passions, but indeed for our JM is just perfect. A kind hand and heart she always has given. So to her my thanks for her kindness and Sharon? By the way hon, take a long look in the mirror, because I see you in that reflection too. Many times over. Hugs! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I see a lot of you in that mirror too, and like I said, knowing Janet Marie, she would gladly share this with you, and I am glad she did. Have a lovely day you all, or ya'll (depending on the border you are behind.) |
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