sometimes the waves break (for JM mothy lady)

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Open Poetry #32

sometimes the waves break (for JM mothy lady)

Midnitesun

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0 posted 2004-06-16 02:00 AM

Sometimes
the waves break unexpectedly,
and we know not
what they brought
until the ebb of tide allows us
a moment of quiet reflection...
a chance to view our own complexion
in the mirrored smiles
of another beating heart.
I always feel a Janet smile,
and hope she feels the returned smile
like a canyoned echo reverberating
across time, space, cyber-reality.
Some people stick to the mind like glue.
Janet, that is the essence
of you.

passing shadows
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displaced

1 posted 2004-06-16 04:27 AM

precious

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2004-06-16 05:50 AM

very beautiful words, Kacy

M

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-06-16 06:52 AM

I always feel a Janet smile,

~*~

One does feel those smiles, when she lands and leaves moth dust thoughts all over your poem...

she does it so well...
and she has a beautiful smile!

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2004-06-16 07:27 AM

Kacy-girl....I hope youre feeling this smile Im wearing now cuz its a dooooozy

You spread your own style of poetic smiles, and they are grooooovy.

Thank you very much Kac...
youre just too cool, and sweet.

People come & go in our lives but the memories & poetry remain...
Of lessons learned, things held in respect, among them is engraved your name.

jm

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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5 posted 2004-06-16 08:13 AM

"a moment of quiet reflection...
a chance to view our own complexion
in the mirrored smiles
of another beating heart."

Great way of putting it, Kacy!

Midnitesun

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6 posted 2004-06-16 09:17 AM

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