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Touch Not
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Touch Not |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Touch not my heart if you don't care I am too fragile, don't you see? Touch not my soul in shallow jest there's only so much left of me. Touch not my sadly weeping eyes if they mean nothing to your heart. Touch not my body, yearning so and later tear it all apart. Touch not my love so bittersweet with hands of ice, or eyes of steel Touch not another single part if nothing that you do is real.. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, You haven't lost your touch or your perspective. I have missed you and am thrilled to see you writing again.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Touching, pun not intended. A delicate and fragile write. Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
The truth of feelings is so aptly displayed here, Sandra. The poem flows so well, and actually brought tears to my heart. Well done, m'lady! ....jo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Sandra....gee, you've been missed. Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes.... what my sister Enchantress said. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good write bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this touches my heart |
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