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Extraordinary Moth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Extraordinary Moth Happy birthday dragon tamer Who doused an old dragons flamer Turned his be to randy doll Sipping tea on a minds atoll She quelled the fires of dragon me Into a dragon drinking tea Landed on my fiery throes Put a handkerchief to my nose A moth that likes to tame a flame A moth with just uncanny aim A moth that carries words of qualm That puts out flames without alarm She’s an Alice in wonderland Without the music without the band With wings that part the mist of myth And powdered with the hues of pith Happy birthday Janet Marie I love your flights of apogee |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
 Well done, Sy! Not only do we all get two poems... but we get to gush JM with double birthday greetings! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
She’s an Alice in wonderland Without the music without the band With wings that part the mist of myth And powdered with the hues of pith Well done Seymour !! Well done. Janet Marie will love this.  hugs, Chris |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Very good birthday verse happy birthday janet enjoyed bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wonderful read. So enjoyed this, had to read it several times. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah a wonderful verse for a most deserving moth! Happy Birthday once again Janet Marie! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She's  I'm sure! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Great write Sy! I think I have the same moth wondering the halls of my home! Very refreshing piece of work. I enjoyed it and smiled all the way through. Kevin |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and I love your vocabualry... "apogee" ... yer just too cool and cute for your own good.  Thank you for this my sweet Sy-guy...ya had me from the first word...but then you always have. You and Randy get extra *winkies* for this. LOL love ya Sy-babers   |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!! A treasure you have created for her...Wonderful... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my! What a lovely sonneteering birthday tribute to a Moth sublime!  Happy birthday, JM!   Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes... ...Happy Birthday, though I'm late in saying |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, happy happy birthday, beautiful poem Love dragons, you know there are some myths that portrayed them as quit friendly fellows....loved this poem Sy, thank you for writing and sharing. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
and extraordinary dragon!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh dragon man, you did the most beautiful gift today not only for Janet Marie, but we all got a treat! Lovely! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile...OH BOY! I get to hug Jan again and sneak a smooch to sy! She's our beloved, ain't she? wonderful sy! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Gorgeous gift to a wonderful lady! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
What a neat happy birthday poem! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Agreeing with Mysteria here Sy ... it's Janet Marie's birthday, but we ALL get to celebrate in your present of words. Loved this sweet Sy.  Happy Birthday JM! Best wishes and hugs to you both, /Kit |
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