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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Overwhelmed, the thoughts are jumbled bumping into one another, images overlapping half dreams, half nightmares, while the clock ticks off the seconds until a hand wakes me up with its repetitive shrill. Another warning of a new day... looking forward to nothing. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Maureen...I know these kinds of nights.. Things are so difficult for you right now.. but please try to find one bright spot in each day. ~Holding you in thought and prayer~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Maureen, Recently I've identified with what you're saying, but am getting through it. Normally I am an indoor person, just doing what needs to done. Last week, I started spending time outdoors, listening to the birds, feeling the breeze, etc. It lent me a different perspective on things. Perhaps, if you haven't done this, it might be refreshing. Good luck to you. Those half dreams and nightmares are worse than having none, so it seems. I enjoyed your writing very much. Sadelite |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you both....I get outside and weed or garden or speak to a few neighbors... today is jut one of the days filled with anxiety...and a trip south in a bit hugs M |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
ah M, as the day goes on, so will you hope things start lookin brighter today but then again i have seen the forcast. have a good trip bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I've been in that place and you have described it perfectly! It's hell! But I flew out of there like a bat out of hades! Whew! Through your illustrious writing, you sure have a way of recreating the good, the bad, and the ugly in my own life! It sounds like that trip south is just what you need right about now! Hope it does the trick, Dear M!  EA |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Maureen, nice work, as usual. And you know I understand. Sandra |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Been there! Done That! Anyone have the cure? JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that day passed, and so will others...keeping you in my prayers |
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