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The cry of a voice in the Wilderness
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The cry of a voice in the Wilderness |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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Rappin’ out Tolerance and Appreciation of differences. Alls good when written with inspired intent. I'm a socialist poet. I believe in poetry for and by the masses. Poetry is written of the heart, not always necessarily with literary art. Thus my little ditty, which some might say is a little bit kiddy, but I think it’s kind’a witty. (big smile here) So you don’t eat beef? No never, not a bit. It’s not my idea of where it is. Veggies, now that’s my thing. Veggies makes a Vegan sing. No Peas for you? Excuse me, but eat something green? Heaven forbid, that’s obscene. Make it red and juicy, dripping over the spit Boy, I’ll tell, you that’s where it is! Pardon me, you two, but may I say Like beef or veggies, either way There is no right, no perfect fit Everyone’s taste differs a bit It’s all good if done just right, But who’s to say what I like is right. I don’t eat steak, but I wouldn’t say That all steak eaters are full of hay. Come on now people, let’s give a bit Not everything is a perfect fit. Look for the beauty in your neighbor’s hood And you’ll be sure to see the good. S.A.T. The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I like it when you kick off your shoes and stomp around like this! Cute write, great message. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent little ditty....much enjoyed! Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I liked this so much. Very cute and loved the message. Hugs, Marti If you truly love Nature, you will find |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Great poem, Susan. Actually, I think this is becoming quite a social issue in some areas. Very cute and witty, but a very valid point!  .....jo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...at Enchantress...I didn't see you stomping at all...just chomping on some good munchies as you brought this one forward... very good, Susan! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good haha morning to you, Dear Socialist Poet!  "I don’t eat steak, but I wouldn’t say That all steak eaters are full of hay." ~ This literally cracked me up!!! LOL "Come on now people, let’s give a bit Not everything is a perfect fit. Look for the beauty in your neighbor’s hood And you’ll be sure to see the good." ~ This deserves a socialistic "Amen"!  Fun read from a fun gal! ~ with a social conscience! ~ Have a marvellous day! Linda |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Off the beaten path yet still quite exquisite and fun. You could make eating cat poop sound pleasant. You simply write gold, Susan. Keep on writing. Kevin |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah fellow compatriots, thank you for raising your Pens in support. Hugs -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Come on now people, let’s give a bit Not everything is a perfect fit. Look for the beauty in your neighbor’s hood And you’ll be sure to see the good." Agreed! JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
What a hoot! Susan, you write anything well, and anything you write is enjoyable! miscellanea |
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