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Maybe My Sweetheart
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Maybe My Sweetheart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Maybe My Sweetheart Maybe she and I won't be so close together. Maybe we'll spend our lives apart. There goes my heart, there goes my sweetheart... Or consider this. Maybe love will keep us together... Maybe in love we'll never part. That's my dream, my desire, my hope and my prayer. In my heart, she'll always be my sweetheart. JamesLee June15 2004 |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
hoping for the "consider this" part for you enjoyed bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The last stanza sounds like the most likely one, Sir Romance!  Loved your unique presentation! Big aloha hugs, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
all that matters is what's in the heart yes |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
one pretty write |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
"You gotta' spend money to make money." "Strike while the iron's hot." "Make hay when the sun shines." "Can't win if you don't play." "Sometimes you gotta' stick your butt out the window to get somewhere." Ya' get where I'm going with this? Great, heartfelt write. It seems abundantly clear what I would do. What the heck are you going to do? "You gonna' drive the bus or sit in the backseat?" Pushing you off the ledge, Kevin |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Pondering as the old adage: “What will be, will be.” When I read this that popped out. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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