nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
|
|
0
posted
2004-06-11
05:39 AM
|
Friday Morning Stretching
Reaching out becomes a lost cause when those arms are in another plane and the turning of a head causes friction in an otherwise empty world.
Its weight sheds thoughts on me, my body clashing against the tendency at odds with the need to lean back for support, heart racing in worry.
It's a stretch that feuds and threatens to assail what has to be...at least for now.
M"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss)
|
© Copyright
2004
Wynter Bliss
- All Rights Reserved
|
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
|
|
1
posted
2004-06-11
07:31 AM
|
sometimes it's better to understand then to fight it and force things. Letting go is the hard part, but the most thoughtful for both.
Good Morning Lady Jane, how are ya Hugs and sending wishes along for a very Happy Friday
|
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
|
|
2
posted
2004-06-11
07:49 AM
|
Maureen, At least for now. Good write.
|
Marshalzu
Member Elite
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681
Lurking
|
|
3
posted
2004-06-11
08:53 AM
|
Wonderful writing 
Andrew
|
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
|
|
4
posted
2004-06-11
08:58 AM
|
I hear you Maureen and understand. Hugs~~Somewhere in my heart I'm always Dancing with you in the summer rain~
|
garysgirl
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
|
|
5
posted
2004-06-11
10:46 AM
|
Maureen, wonderful writing, as always. I hope that you have a good weekend, sweet lady.
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
|
|
6
posted
2004-06-11
09:04 PM
|
Very well done, Maureen!
|
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
|
|
7
posted
2004-06-11
09:58 PM
|
perhaps i don't reply enough but i always enjoy and understand your writing
|
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
|
|
8
posted
2004-06-15
12:36 PM
|
Friday went by quick...Saturday and Sunday too
missed reading you M
|
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
|
|
9
posted
2004-06-15
01:39 PM
|
Excellent poem. Felt this one.
JL 
She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”
|
|