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kaile
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0 posted 2004-06-15 12:52 PM


the villagers formed
a tight circle around us,
heads bowed, hands clasped,
mouths moving in sync with
the priest chanting prayers for us

praying for our safety back to our homeland,
praying that we would have a good life and
enjoy marital bliss, with kids to brighten our days

we chuckled a bit there,
perhaps amused at how
they so matter-of-factly
equate a good life with marriage and kids

but most times,
we remained silent to pay homage
to this strange chant in foreign voices
not comprehending, yet understanding enough~
this ritual was done out of love,
never mind that we are greenhouse students
who only spent three weeks with them

for a long time after the prayers,
the smiling villagers surged forward
to tie yellow strings around our waists,
saying that this is for our "good luck"

they communicated their care, despite the language barrier
I wish I were foresighted enough
to think of a simple gesture
in which to reciprocrate their love


© Copyright 2004 heng kaile - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-06-15 01:23 AM


kaile -- what a tremendous experience and you wrote about it so well that I thought I watched!   ....jo
kaile
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2 posted 2004-06-15 01:59 AM


iliana, thanks for your comment. i was hoping that people could relate to this enriching, life-affirming experience
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-06-15 08:05 PM


I like this...interesting...I believe the pleasure was all theirs...to be able to offer a love blessing...James
Susan
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4 posted 2004-06-15 08:10 PM


The genuine article of love was displayed here.  Enjoyed.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Larry C
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5 posted 2004-06-15 08:41 PM


kaile,
So let me get this straight. You're married? I knew you are loved by many. But now you're loved by one? Dang, and I missed it. I'd like to have been in that circle. Hope your catch was as good as what was caught. And knowing you...they know.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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