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Passionate Woman - for Janet Marie
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Passionate Woman - for Janet Marie |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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For all you have given to all of us, may this birthday bless you, Janet Marie, with all of your love in return Passionate Woman Passionate woman, delicate heart Songbird of love from which lyrics depart You are the essence of earth’s greatest hymns You are the source from which music begins Passionate woman, dreamer of nights Wrapped in the glow of mysterious delights Swept to our door on the wings of a dove Bringing to us an indelible love Passionate woman, mind of a sage Speaker of wisdom and reaper of age Where are the words that exude from your pen? They’re written in phrases endowed to a friend Passionate woman, maker of dreams Following flow of the white water streams Where did she go when she rounded the bend? She left behind rainbows to comfort a friend Thank you, Janet Marie With Love Liz |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh mercy Liz, but is she ever going to love this! Especially the reference to the ocean. I wish I could wrap mine up and send it to her for her birthday, nope - better still - wish I could take it to her m'self! Beautiful Liz, she is truly a kind, loving, considerate, and generous woman - and she write pretty darn good herself yanno? Loved these lines m'friend: Passionate woman, maker of dreams Following flow of the white water streams Where did she go when she rounded the bend? She left behind rainbows to comfort a friend ~* Happy Birthday Janet Marie *~ Bet I will be saying that more than once today  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz You are so beautiful, as is Janet Marie. Thank you for sharing this!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Elizabeth -- this was just beautifully written. What a very sweet thing to do for a friend. HAPPY BIRTHDAY, JANET MARIE! ! ! ENJOY! ....jo |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Where did she go when she rounded the bend? She left behind rainbows to comfort a friend beautiful tribute to a beautiful person. these lines stunned me the most.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She IS passion's mainstay... so let's wish her that she double up on her birthdays... because reading her is SO much fun! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Liz, this has such a beautiful flow as always. You have such an amazing talent, my friend. Happy Birthday JM! Not only do you bring warmth and delight to us when "you" write ... but you bring warmth and delight when others write "about" you!  Best wishes to two of my favorite Passionate ladies, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh my... its gonna be a mothy tear day... Liz, this is so sweet of you..and so lovely.. I am so touched and honored by your sharing of rhyme. Me thinks you've left many a rainbow of your own...this one is ribboned with light. Thank you very much dear poetess of grace... and thank you everyone for such warm, endearing responses... As Sharon and Kari always say... wheres the Kleenex alert. Thank you  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful Liz...  HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY JANET MARIE!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Passionate woman, dreamer of nights Wrapped in the glow of mysterious delights Swept to our door on the wings of a dove Bringing to us an indelible love Lovely thoughts bring good tidings...what a lovely poem, light of morning you are, wishing you a wonderful day. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful offering Liz! hugs, Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A lovely gift to our Janet Marie from our very gifted sonnet queen! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A wonderful tribute to a lady who is a friend to us all. Beautifully crafted as always Lady Santos. and Happy Birthday, m'girlie. |
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