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Little Miracles |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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We lick the flames of abyss Tasting sweet full circle rawness Uninvited, you come, like some eerie art Feeding on weakened souls I don’t want you here! What would it cost to send you away? Take everything, God, take me! For a Moment dust is dust ************************************* Conscious comes in waves that flow Mystically feeling essence perpetual From a dreamer of inspiration Of touch not forgotten, of rainbows…forests Wild deer Phone taps my mind, ringing…ringing, loud I don’t answer, maybe it’s God or Ghosts from a good good childhood I see you, emotion don’t fail me now! I see inside the heart where dreams are safe Drinking life…morning petals line embers A fading life values so, such little things Such tremendous miracles dancing…dancing On just a visit… Adoration torments insomnia…self induced sanity Leans on every moment, every mood, plunging into my prayers Waiting at my doorstep…for another vision, another verse Sophisticated desire…giving cashmere dogwoods power Glances into the north star, which moved…once There are signs of life in silver curtains…uncertain, but there After breathing is done, fog clears on the mirror Penetrating a store…swirling water, innocence, crystal clear waterfalls Like a picnic in spring, underneath a rose arbor Fountain of compassion, silence, converting expression Into some passion alive in the soul..ca ching…ca ching My life was so magnificently poor, with photographs of faith I liked the sunrise and little wading pools Trout fishing near the jagged shores…regret is silent Soft trade winds, I am, peeling away drizzles of rain Beauty learns to talk…peace on earth, moonlight walks I am sweet dreams…double layered, feeling all things All things I may or may not comprehend…but try I climb the Empire State Building To touch the homeless, streets of Golden Kissing morning’s enthusiasm hello Catching the surf…my true home makes me woman Tutorials, testimonials and all little graces Who knows if I am All I know is that I was! Watercolors and art told me so |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Soft trade winds, I am, peeling away drizzles of rain Beauty learns to talk…peace on earth, moonlight walks I am sweet dreams…double layered, feeling all things" WOW!! How DO you do this??!! Amazing write dear lady~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Good question, how DO you do it? Amazing. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
ditto you are amazing!!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You DA Bomb! And I do agree WOW! JL  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Soft trade winds, I am, peeling away drizzles of rain Beauty learns to talk…peace on earth, moonlight walks I am sweet dreams…double layered, feeling all things All things I may or may not comprehend…but try" ~ Yes, it is quite apparent that you do try! ~ and Dear Lee, you DO succeed! ~ and you convey your comprehension exceptionally well! Yours is a very special talent, poetessa! You are an artiste!   Linda |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Who knows if I am All I know is that I was! Watercolors and art told me so Lee, this is such a beautiful write. I do think that it may be my favorite of yours so far.  Hugs, sweet lady Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have grown...I have learned... to understand you and I'm in awe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Even though my eyes are closing, I MUST tell you, that this is a miracle in itself. Love, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Yeah Wow! Such tapistry so rich and delicate. Powerful, powerful write. TD |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 awe inspiring write youve outdone yourself!! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
"Who knows if I am All I know is that I was! Watercolors and art told me so" Your poem is full of wonderful images and profound thoughts. Enjoyed very much. SG |
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