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Thought Touches |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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You dress me in minds gifting remembrances of days when sigh songs were sung in shimmer moments spent listening to the quiet of your voice. I bask in the light of your minds gifting. A flicker of flame shines through the dark warming thought places, leaving a damp need of soothing and sating desires with lover sighs while languishing in your thought touches.... If I once again whispered~ would you remember the sound of me? {slightly revised repost} It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hey beautiful  this is very touching and written so beautifully....hugsss dear... ~~**~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh wow Donna...SOOOO Beautiful!! Hugs sweet lady~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle I'm sure he would, well done. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful!  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"If I once again whispered~ would you remember the sound of me?" this... fantastic!!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Donna, how could he possibly forget the whisper of a spirit so gentle?  Linda |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautifully expressed Donna ... I too love those thought touches , but yes I ask the same question ... would he remember me ?? Hope |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Lovely. Susan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You dress me in minds gifting remembrances of days when sigh songs were sung in shimmer moments spent listening to the quiet of your voice. ========================= cool word play...I love when I see our fellow poets influences inspiring the forums. well done poetess Donna. ... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...if he doesn't remember, I always will and I've never even met you! Beautiful, my friend. jwesley |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good write bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
he'd better! or I'll come whip him into hearing mode! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You dress me in minds gifting remembrances of days when sigh songs were sung in shimmer moments Donna~ This is exactly how memories should be kept, close to the heart. Nicely done, hon~ |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very nice i love it Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ummm hmmmm yep, can feel the strum of lady fingers on these notes enjoyed this ms D |
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