Open Poetry #32 |
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Why Do I Still Write.... |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Why Do I Still Write... ...these poems you may never see? Because in the deepest part of my soul you are always wih me; your tenderness is tucked around the corners of my heart, your gentleness wakes me each day with a smile and the softness in your eyes still warms me, remembering. Wear it lightly, this love I still bear you. Wrap it close around you on days when your heart feels a draft, on nights when silence is not a friend. When you need it most, wear it lightly and smile, smile for me. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beki It would seem you write for love, and that is reason enough. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wear it lightly, this love I still bear you. Wrap it close around you on days when your heart feels a draft, on nights when silence is not a friend. beautifully expressed...and a very good reason to still be writing...thank you... |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A very lovely write Beki. Enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Beki~ I think you still write to touch me with your thoughts~ Were I to want to quote a 'favorite' part of this ... I would need to quote it all~ It TOUCHES corners of THIS heart~ ![]() Thank you~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Beki: Someone probably wishes the same for you, and somehow you sense this. You MUST write... ~K~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very lovely writing, Beki! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...because in the deepest part of your soul... ~*~ poetry lives. Oh Beki... this is beautiful! |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you everyone, I am so glad these simple words touched each of you (Marge - what a lovely thing to say ![]() And Kahlil ~ you are correct, I MUST write...when I don't my life feels totally out of balance... and Sunshine ~you are also write,poetry has lived inme as long as I can remember and that's a very long time! Thank you again everyone, your comments are truly appreciated. |
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